• Cookies : Volume 9, Spike x Rarity: Las Pegasus Wedding (Garbage Fic). “That… is no excuse, Twilight Sparkle.” growled a familiar voice. I'll probably flunk out. “Eeyup.” Spike said and turned away from her. *Sighs* The CMC are Snooping again. Fimfiction.net (also known as FIMFiction.net) is a Web site dedicated to hosting Fan Fiction based on My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic. She's Twilight Sparkle, I've hated her and all MLP for their ways since day one, I get a KICK out of bashing them and shaming them. I do agree that Twilight was utterly OOC in the episode, but her friends would have probably tried to talk things through before just jumping to conclusions. This is Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo. full/top marks for effort/trying/persistence etc. 1,477 users online I post a 1000 word prolouge, and it gets sixteen thumbs down instantly.... then I post another story... it had only ONE VIEW... yet four downvotes... even when I say a simple THANK YOU or HELLO... downvote galore. Finally! Greg Cipes loved my format of making vids, and called them "His Favorite kind", Well, I doubt you'll be getting any from me. "Isn't this place for... "EVERY CREATURE!". I am an Anti-Brony, I hate MLP, so why am I here? So if you did get offended, sorry. Ask your students to look around the room and signal when they locate a punctuation mark. • Licenses, Support us Short Run in Peru: The full episode was released early in Finland in mid-May 2018. This. My main irritation in "Marks for Effort" was with Twilight. And while I'm at it, I'll fix YOU and your own serious lack of judgment. 10 Helping with Big Mac's chores. And she wouldn't have much reason to suspect Cozy Glow, due to that very convincing performance she gave after "failing" the test. I call it "WINTER'S PRIME", I call it that because, for some increasingly insane reason, at this time of year it snows the hardest and is the absolute coldest it can possibly get all season! You believe you're the Princess of Friendship? Please make an effort to go to the local meeting.. She made an effort to keep her eyes on his.. She seemed to make an effort to show more energy.. This was a cute short collection of vignettes, covered in awful grammar and enough typos to give any proofreader a hernia. Twily never yelled at them. Marks for Effort: Twilight's Reprimanding written by DakariKingMykan. you I know you said you "Don't EXPECT anything back" but what is also means is "You REFUSE anything rewarded to you" why my haters would bitch at anyone the second they took a reward they were offered when you're supposed "Give form your heart and REFUSE". (Just like the rest of you do, right?). / When helping goes wrong. • Staff 1,477 users online Well ep was certainly pathetic. I would say that's good... that way I don't have to listen to HER all the time, but why do I have a feeling she's going to regret that. The CMC have a mighty big rep, so it's heavily implied that everyone knows OF them, and their crazy stunts. In my Starfleet Season five, the CMC had a better way of getting to know people; by taking a small census (As was part of their school project). She makes an effort, but not too much of one.. You have to make an effort to look after them.. Not only for that. → mark Examples from the Corpus give ... top marks • We also gave it top marks … Cutie Mark … MLP Review: Marks for Effort. Well it's season 8 of Beast Boy's Magic Voices (My ever popular music vid series on Youtube) and today I loaded a very special vid. 8974456What other conclusion would she have reached? And don't try to deny it, your attitudes as well as mine speak differently. Previous. There is no need to hate on her. Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2021, • Privacy Twily made it up to the Crusaders by acknowledging her mistake and making them tutors. Tag: marks for effort. https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/769267/if-im-an-anti-brony-why-am-i-on-this-site, I NEED MY CONVENTION TIME!! Uh oh... the Crusader's got one of their IDEAS. Word of … Okay, Cactus Helmet... What the hell?! In fact, for even THINKING of doing such a thing, I'd rather the friendship be irreparably broken, and no amount of apology will get her back on the good side (she's lost), If you think This was bad... you should see my FRIENDSHIP IS FAILURE series. • Cookies Note that I usually don't like critiquing people's stories, because I tend to think that my critiquing is always a little harsh, even when it isn't. Even the Teen titan actors themselves hated the episode and the way it went, and they also agree with me and many others like me... though Terra's reasons for wanting to kick BB out of her life and forget her past was understandable, the way she went about it was way cruel and cold. The examples you cite are examples of character growth, not deviation. this IS my hobby making fics and vids for the main sole purpose of bashing characters and steam blowing to control stress, as well as to finally get what I prefer out of these shows... 8974575Are you ok man... do you need a hug. Marks for Effort. For example, the blindfold thing flew right past me. And for the past few years, Springtime has been horribly delayed (In 2018, Spring practically never came). You seem to have javascript disabled, or your browser is failing to execute it properly. Twilight Sparkle has done some rather harsh and mean things before, but judging the CMC whom she knows very well and banning them from her school is a bit too much. I'll spare it. :) Idk why Hasbro likes making Twilight go over the top ALL the time XD, but no matter how ill tempered she is, Twi will always be one of my favorite characters. Signals can include standing up or raising a hand. and demolishes the School of Friendship right in front of her. Well, an obvious theory by many, Twilight's more of a CONTROL FREAK than a Friend (Constantly getting in people's faces and forcing them to accept her views of friendship) It's not an unshared theory, but that's just me and others. “We’re right behind you Rainbow Dash.” agreed Rarity and the other girls all left, even Fluttershy turned angrily away from Twilight and walked away with her back turned. Marks for Effort Awards and Nominations. A community for My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic fanfiction writers to gather to write stories and comment on them. 12 Cozy Glow's friendship studies. Makes me want to forget doing nice things for them PERIOD. File:Apple Bloom "we're the Cutie Mark Crusaders" S8E12.png File:Apple Bloom "we've still got lots to learn" S8E12.png File:Apple Bloom "well, now you do" S8E12.png Page generated in 0.044 seconds https://www.fimfiction.net/story/427563/friendship-is-failure-14-a-hearths-warming-carol. If you bothered to actually READ, THEY DID KNOW the story. Broken-hearted and with tears in their eyes, the girls walked sadly out of the office, and out the school doors, which Twilight slammed shut. Cause of how it treated Twilight? "Understand something: You are never going to change who I am. This one covers two Season 2 episodes, one from Season 4 … 25 Comments. The Cutie Mark Crusaders, bored of the Ponyville School, wants to enroll in Twilight’s School of Friendship. In my MLP story, there's a nod to fans reactions behind this, as one of my villainous OCs captures Twilight, brings her to the school of friendship, yells straight at her face, saying: "You think you can run this piece of garbage? Fluttershy's capable of giving someone a cold-shoulder. Oh, gee. Gag! Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2021, • Privacy Read this...! What have I told you about Saying that?! *Glaring at Sweetie Belle*. ". { { {next}}} Marks for Effort is the twelfth episode of season eight of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic and the one hundred and eighty-first overall. (I care more about RESULTS than EFFORT) If I don't like the results, you get scorned, plain and simple. Prince Charles gives teachers top marks for effort The Prince of Wales said that parents now have a new-found appreciation for teachers, after being forced to homeschool in the pandemic The episode dubbed in Finnish was released early on Ruutu's on demand service on May 16, 2018. Be the first to contribute! It's official: Marks for Effort is on my shit list. Some people are way more screwed than Twilight is. (I'm just being insulting). I wish I could criticize this story for how horrifically terrible it is, but then I'm going to get banned because the writer can't handle people saying negative things about the liquid shit they spewed into their keyboard over the course of 4 and a half seconds. Playing next. How can anyone not see that Pinkie was so pissed with Twilight she didn't even want to look at her? A page for describing Laconic: My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic S8 E12 "Marks for Effort". ^^ My MLP story " My Little Pony: Friendship vs Evil " is a 10 part story, and I'm working on the first 5 parts right now, read what I have in each part so far if you want. Energy and climate policy observers grade Angela Merkel's government 3.7 points out of 10 for climate efforts in a mid-term review. Throw It In! • Staff Point is, those CMCs are being really pathetic right now with bogus acts. Chat! “What are you doing?” Twilight asked. Report. She still KNOWS the crusaders better than that, and DESPITE the evidence, she still had no right to behave the way she did. and look at the people who LIKED my stuff. Introduce the task of searching for the hidden punctuation marks. Twilight’s blood turned cold as she looked over at the doors to her office, “Princess Celestia…”. Reply. Maybe if they did, then the episode would not be so bad. https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/769267/if-im-an-anti-brony-why-am-i-on-this-site, Debunking Tanks for the Memories (Concept of Death). Marks For Effort. Even at Anime North, due to my 15 years experience there, I guided lost people around, and showed them were to look for things they really wanted. Please make an effort with these, every one of you.. Make an effort to see people you are close to.. I also hate Cozy Glow (and this is before I saw School Raze, which I still haven't seen yet; I still have the rest of the season to get through first!) Full marks for effort Simon Everitt has recently ventured to the outer reaches of Doncaster in his quest to visit every pub in CAMRA’s Good Beer Guide . but she came across as being very unfair to the CMC over the failed exam business. MLEEP Reviews – positive (8.5/10; "while it does have a few flaws here and there, the effort that was put into 'Marks For Effort' really does show") The Railfan Brony – mixed (rated Okay; "a thin plot and predictable outcome") Rainbine – very negative ("3/10; "Before we got to the Starlight scene, the episode felt slow, dull, and boring [...] This was a Very Bad Episode.") I really don't get all the hate Twilight has gotten for her actions in that episode. If I was there, I'd give her a big fat no and walk away. And technically, she did hear their side of the story. I am an Anti-Brony, I hate MLP, so why am I here? 1,554,523 hits today, 1,660,130 yesterday, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction This was great! 1,554,506 hits today, 1,660,130 yesterday, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction For me: Avoiding that whole hornet's nest completely and work on fics, vids and blogs instead). All Episodes (235) Next. (Cartoon works). You seem to have javascript disabled, or your browser is failing to execute it properly. !” snapped Twilight, and she opened the doors motioned for the girls to leave “I’m going to have to ask you to stay away from my school and my students. Rarity heard what Twilight did to the crusaders, (from around the corner She heard everything that was said) she and the others knew what the crusaders had done the past few days, and THEY all knew the crusaders would never try such a horrible thing as to make Cozy flunk. Rarityfan1992 Sep 13, 2018. Oyi! *Get the anti-CMC-PLAN kit ready* It's always the same with those little squirts. 9032394Not sure how that relates to my comment about how inexcusable Twilight's behavior was, but I'll take your word on that. Pinkie even went to stronger but silly methods; wearing a blindfold over her eyes, and a clothespin over her nostils. XD, Still, this is a great story. Season 8 | Episode 12. Twilight's apology means nothing to me. If Celestia was still alive, she'd be so disappointed in you.. SHE TALKS TO AN ANGEL... Angel never acts like a brat, Fluttershy isn't as cowardly as she used to be, Rarity is becoming less of a Diva and more open minded... WRONG MOVE (Pick a path and stick to it), At least Pinkie is still acting as crazy and as hyper active as she should be. Parish C. PMID: 12211840 [PubMed - indexed for MEDLINE] MeSH Terms. Just look at all the comments I got here... (More than half the reason I got loads of downvotes, and my comments get downvotes is cuz of ignoramus bigoted bullies on this site who take pride in knocking me down). After all, she gets angry too. Twitter, MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2021 Hasbro Inc.® 548 Views. 21:36. I have been waiting to see someone do something like this. 21:27. mlp-fim s8 e11 - molt down. I think you need to do some serious thinking.”. Instead in your story they did the exact thing that Twilight did to the CMC: Not listen to her side of the story. Patreon I seriously laughed-out-loud a few times. I help around the house as best I can, and I even weeded the entire garden, and everyone's still all cranky and loudmouthed. And what Cozy Glow was equally, if not WORSE, failing on purpose like that. Are you kidding...? True, pitching in DOES make chores go faster, but that doesn't mean the people will be thankful, grateful. It relates that people bitch and protest to me for scorning Twilight too (I know how it feels to be chewed). My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic - S08 E12 - Marks for Effort - June 2, 2018 || MLP 8X12 || My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic 06/02/2018. Would upvote if spelling wasn't physically painful to read. RailfanBronyMedia Sep 13, 2018. I mean, look at all these downvotes! In this episode, the Cutie Mark Crusaders try to convince Twilight Sparkle to let them into the School of Friendship, even though it's clear they've already mastered the curriculum. Invite your students to play “I Spy” with three different punctuation marks: a period, a question mark, and an exclamation point. She's Twilight Sparkle, I've hated her and all MLP for their ways since day one, I get a KICK out of bashing them and shaming them. And there are some people over on the wiki who tried to justify Twilight's inexcusable behavior... which scares me to be honest. • Licenses, Support us Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®. Her mother would never have to make an effort again. F for Effort: More of the Very Best Totally Wrong Test Answers is exactly as it sounds. And I love it. “Not you, too, Fluttershy?” cried Twilight. (What could be better than Learning about Friendship with your best friends? Add To Groups. Total duration What can I say..? 2 talking about this. I'm Apple Bloom. Twitter, MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2021 Hasbro Inc.® 13 Failed! . I was so mad at Twilight in Marks For Effort, and it was awesome reading this. The CMC attempt to enroll at the School of Friendship, but it's … Reply. “I can’t SEE or SMELL you either.” replied Pinkie. "When you give form your heart, you don't expect anything back...", ..PUH-LEASE!!! Nurs Stand. ", Remember, there's a Difference between UNDERSTANDABLE and EXCUSABLE. 1. games and cartoons. 51 Favourites. And FYI, there's nothing really wrong with the spelling, but I'm blocking you anyway for horrible attention span and lack of judgment. Attitude of Health Personnel* She was not that harsh. I couldn't put earmuffs on her or she wouldn't hear what Twilight's saying. So please no spoilers. “Sorry, Twilight… but even I have standards. Follow us Anthology. Total duration Hahahaha! TV-Y | 22min | Animation, Adventure, Comedy | Episode aired 2 June 2018. MLP: FiM. Let's see how you'll disgust me this time...My LOSER Ponies. Final score: three meh's out of five. I'm glad that Twilight realized her mistake, but if she knew the CMC would great tutors, why didn't she and the others tell them that? 15 Cleaning up at the schoolhouse. Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®. She had basically three episodes with them before this one: The Show Stoppers, Twilight Time, and Surf and/or Turf. How did you feel about Twilight's lack of judgment? It must be said that Simon’s blog is well worth following, not least for his no-punches-pulled assessment of pubs. Full marks for effort. But I'm glad to see someone who thinks DARK (Maybe you'd like my FRIENDSHIP IS FAILURE series), 8974382She is a control freak sometimes, that's actually true, but most of the time, she's just struggling to know what real friendship actually is, and it makes her that much ill tempered, as evidenced in the Movie when she yells at Pinkie and says " I'd rather not have friends like you! 11 Cozy Glow gets an A / Helping more. For even THINKING that the crusaders did it, is bad enough to make us want to yell at her, but banning them from the school (Guilty until proven innocent), Me to Twilight: "I ought to kick you clear into orbit for you reprehensible behavior today! Marks for Effort: Episode 13 The Mean 6: Episode 14 A Matter of Principals: Episode 15 The Hearth's Warming Club: Episode 16 Friendship University: Episode 17 The End in Friend: Episode 18 Yakity-Sax: Episode 19 Road to Friendship: Episode 20 The Washouts: Episode 21 A Rockhoof and a Hard Place: Episode 22 What Lies Beneath: Episode 23 Sounds of Silence: Episode 24 Father Knows Beast